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When Roland was young he was made to pick between
toys his teacher was giving. He picked the coolest
one inside, but see that wasn't the only reason no.
See Roland was told that on Christmas their was a gift
coming. Someone for him to play with. A little sister.
Unfortunately Roland never got his playmate.

And so he saw the little sister he wanted so much
in the doll. The boys would and girls would taunt him,
but they didn't understand it was deeper then that.
But Roland's parents understood it instinctively, and
let him keep the doll.

But one day as Rolands eyes slightly awoke he would
see the doll stitch up portals to another dimension.
He didn't know or understand what it was all at first.
And waved it off as something as just a dream. Roland
enjoy playing with her, as if she was his sister.
He drive those kid cars pretending she was real.
He hug her affectionately. And say I wish you were
alive.

So one day he forgot his books at school, in it was the
pages he was supposed to do as well. He grew very
nervous, and paranoid, because this was going to
determine his grade of weather he flunked or passed.
He wished he could somehow go to the class to retain
his material. He cried if their just was some way.
Beth felt sorry for him as he was the only person,
or live thing for that matter to lavish affection on
her.

And so she revealed her liveliness to the boy. Don't
cry Roland I'll help you get it back. Roland blinked
in surprise. Thinking it wasn't real, and just a dream
he went on with his supposed delusion. She sowed a
portal and it he hesitantly and curiously when in it.
As he saw her do, she put her hand in it and waved
come on Roland.

Roland went in and saw things in the portal that no
man can mention, a sort of mystifying beauty, and
elegance.A sort of chaotic and disorder sort of like
a rainbow from a prism. Or the hippie tie dye spectrum
in a psychedelic drug trip.He gets his paper, and
she opens the portal toget back home. He notices her
walk away, and makes she makes a little mischievous
smirk.He sees her put a tack on the teacher's seat.
Then he sees hercome towards the portal. He crosses
his arms and says whispering what are you doing?

She responds innocently putting her
arms behind her back, and swiveling her little
foot back and forth taping it:  Well she did give
you a F and was going to flunk you. Don't you think
she deserves something bad to happen to her to.
At first he neglected it and wanted her to take it
out, and demanded. But she managed to convince him
with her logic, and plus he thought it was just
a dream as well. He said okay a tac isn't going to
do alot I guess, and he thought it was even payback
anyways. So then he goes back into the portal
is home and goes sound asleep peacefully after he
finished his homework.

When he awakes he thinks of the funny dream he had,
and smiled. Yet he couldn't explain how he actually
got to finish his homework when he could have sworn
it was in class. Perhaps it to was a a fantasy in
his head he had conjured up while daydreaming in
the car when he got home. He prepares for school
with no joy, because he has no worry anymore.
And then his mother announces to him in static.
You can't go to school! Today your teacher went into
the class and someone vandalized all the desks, books,
and drew in the walls. The police are investigating
scene of the crime. Roland's eyes open as big as they
can and he realizes the doll Beth is real.
 This is actually not my character's I wrote this story, because I was asked to by thedarkknite.deviantart.com/
I like to write and be put on the spot I read their story and from what I gathered wrote this piece based on their description sta.sh/01tfhlh0rohm

So these character's are of this user Not Mines.  I thought he needed more of a connection to why he chose the doll
then it just looking cool, and odd to him. He needed an emotion attachment other wise he seem gay to straight kids.
I don't know who this cartoon, or story is aimed towards, but the trippyness of the portal is just a visualization
material since none was given of how it looked inside. It has nothing to do with drugs. lol 

I don't think a story need to exactly treat children like idiots, and patronize them. Children to me are mentally little
adults that haven't learned meanings yet. Thats why when they talk to you they speak waving their arms with their hands like hey dumbass don't you get what I'm saying, and then we learn the word dumbass.lol And don't need to do that anymore.lol Anyways I thought it be a good lesson to teach them with loss, and a sort of empathy of how they can deal with it. 

I was listening to Rhianna Diamonds www.youtube.com/watch?v=lWA2pjโ€ฆ
I'm weird I like to write and draw with music, or watching a video. But with music its kinda like your brain, or your typing, your thoughts go with the beat. It goes boom, boom, boom.  I use to as a kid watch on tv politically incorrect, listen to the radio, and do my homework at the same time. I think I'm weird for it, but one my friends does this as well. I guess its something in our generation. Even now I am doing multiple things.


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